United Federation of Planets vs Galacitic Empire

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Re: United Federation of Planets vs Galacitic Empire

Post by Picard » Wed Aug 11, 2010 4:26 pm

The Dude wrote:32 lightyear range for the Yamato, WTF?
From Memory Gamma.

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Basically same as ICS except it is online and in wiki form.

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Re: United Federation of Planets vs Galacitic Empire

Post by The Dude » Wed Aug 11, 2010 4:32 pm

Ah, the USS Penile Compensator of non-canon fame.

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Re: United Federation of Planets vs Galacitic Empire

Post by The Dude » Wed Aug 11, 2010 9:55 pm

lol Looks like they stuck the Defiant on the back end of two Akira.

Its a kitsmash!

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Re: United Federation of Planets vs Galacitic Empire

Post by Mr. Oragahn » Thu Aug 12, 2010 4:02 pm

Can't beat that firepower:
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EDIT: Oi, that one's fugly. Is that the one you're talking about?

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Re: United Federation of Planets vs Galacitic Empire

Post by The Dude » Thu Aug 12, 2010 6:03 pm

Yup, its a visual and technical abortion.

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Re: United Federation of Planets vs Galacitic Empire

Post by Mike DiCenso » Fri Aug 13, 2010 5:43 am

Gentlemen, you should really take that to the privacy of a room. ;-)
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Re: United Federation of Planets vs Galacitic Empire

Post by Youngla0450 » Mon Aug 16, 2010 2:42 am

The Federation is WINNING? Why?

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Re: United Federation of Planets vs Galacitic Empire

Post by The Dude » Mon Aug 16, 2010 10:42 am

Gee, maybe he likes it that way? It may be non-canon sillyness but thats his prerogative.

Irony=author of crappy fan fiction slams author of crappy fan fiction. The only difference between his stuff and yours, is that you prefer the Empire to be on top.

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Re: United Federation of Planets vs Galacitic Empire

Post by Picard » Mon Aug 16, 2010 1:36 pm

The Dude wrote:lol Looks like they stuck the Defiant on the back end of two Akira.

Its a kitsmash!
True. Seems Federation is obsessed with kitbashes.

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Re: United Federation of Planets vs Galacitic Empire

Post by Youngla0450 » Mon Aug 16, 2010 3:23 pm

The Dude wrote:Gee, maybe he likes it that way? It may be non-canon sillyness but thats his prerogative.

Irony=author of crappy fan fiction slams author of crappy fan fiction. The only difference between his stuff and yours, is that you prefer the Empire to be on top.
Stop saying rude stuff about my work. You could be more respectful. You might be a army veteran, but it gives you NO reason to be rude.

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Re: United Federation of Planets vs Galacitic Empire

Post by Mith » Mon Aug 16, 2010 4:20 pm

The Dude wrote:Gee, maybe he likes it that way? It may be non-canon sillyness but thats his prerogative.

Irony=author of crappy fan fiction slams author of crappy fan fiction. The only difference between his stuff and yours, is that you prefer the Empire to be on top.
The Portal wasn't too bad actually. The characters were more or less written accurately for the time, though I hated seeing Dax and Troi again--two of the most uninteresting and annoying characters in the series and we get to see them fighting over Worf--oh boy.

I did enjoy his take on the Empire and the battles were fairly interesting, although I think they were a little too lopsided for the Federation--at least from an artistic standpoint. It's really not a great enemy if the only thing they have is massive numbers to throw at you. Worse still, we never really got to feel the presence of the Empire--ie, never got to see Vader trying to establish a military presence.

The problem though, extends from having it centered so close to Earth. It should have taken place several light years away to allow the Empire to establish some form of threat by taking some poorly defended worlds--possibly coming into conflict with the Dominion.

But overall, it was a half-decent fanfic.

Young...not to be rude, but your fanfics are painful to read. They look more like a poor story outline or plot synopsis. There's no characters, no story, and no power behind your writing. It's just like listening to some fanboy tell us their wet dream.

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Re: United Federation of Planets vs Galacitic Empire

Post by Mith » Mon Aug 16, 2010 4:22 pm

Picard wrote:
The Dude wrote:32 lightyear range for the Yamato, WTF?
From Memory Gamma.

http://memory-gamma.wikia.com/wiki/Memo ... troduction

Basically same as ICS except it is online and in wiki form.
Someone needs to call for General Order 24. That site makes me absolutely sick to my stomach. Jesus Christ, gets some God damned standards people.

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Re: United Federation of Planets vs Galacitic Empire

Post by The Dude » Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:04 pm

Youngla0450 wrote:
Stop saying rude stuff about my work. You could be more respectful. You might be a army veteran, but it gives you NO reason to be rude.
What in blue blazes does my career have to do with anything?

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Re: United Federation of Planets vs Galacitic Empire

Post by Mike DiCenso » Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:33 pm

Mith wrote:Young...not to be rude, but your fanfics are painful to read. They look more like a poor story outline or plot synopsis. There's no characters, no story, and no power behind your writing. It's just like listening to some fanboy tell us their wet dream.
We've all been telling this to Youngla more or less for quite some time now, but it just does not sink in with him.
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Re: United Federation of Planets vs Galacitic Empire

Post by Mr. Oragahn » Tue Aug 17, 2010 2:56 am

Youngla0450 wrote:
The Dude wrote:Gee, maybe he likes it that way? It may be non-canon sillyness but thats his prerogative.

Irony=author of crappy fan fiction slams author of crappy fan fiction. The only difference between his stuff and yours, is that you prefer the Empire to be on top.
Stop saying rude stuff about my work. You could be more respectful. You might be a army veteran, but it gives you NO reason to be rude.
How dare you call that work?
It's a waste of about everything down to the most little atom of oxygen you mercilessly squished between your fingers and the CTRL and V keys on your keyboard.

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